Brillant piece of art. Your style is very nice, clear and efficient. The perspective, characters, colours, atmosphere and amount of details are well done. I'm not even into the Pokemon thing but this drawing caught my attention and admiration.
The only thing that bothers me in that pic is that abusive bloom effect. It's kinda raping the scene. It looks like a nuke is exploding outside. You should appease a bit the bloom aroud the windows and remove the one around the tv, which is quite useless.
That's all I have to say. You did a very good job. Keep up the good work
Thank you very much for the critique!
interesting input, I did actually think it looked like a nuke when I was doing it ha ha. I wanted to exaggerate the brightness to give a more dream or memory type of look to the image, like it dosent exist in reality. The Tv glow may be useless though, I just think it looks nice.