Brillant piece of art. Your style is very nice, clear and efficient. The perspective, characters, colours, atmosphere and amount of details are well done. I'm not even into the Pokemon thing but this drawing caught my attention and admiration.

The only thing that bothers me in that pic is that abusive bloom effect. It's kinda raping the scene. It looks like a nuke is exploding outside. You should appease a bit the bloom aroud the windows and remove the one around the tv, which is quite useless.

That's all I have to say. You did a very good job. Keep up the good work